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4.27.10

April 27, 2010

Through your eyes,
I see your soul.

Through your eyes,
You see my soul.

Through our eyes,
we see the world,
in a way that only
our eyes could see.

Our eyes are our souls’
fingerprints.
Our fingerprints are our bodies’
identification.

Our souls want to burst,
burst out into the world,
full blown and in color.

So in every little way possible,
our souls find a way,
to shine outside our spaces.

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13 comments

  1. Beautiful words. Thank you.


  2. This is nicely said and done my young friend.

    I have posted a poem in Shakira’s honor. You might also like to read other poems with my name on them. Viola Tabor

    http://billmanson.blogspot.com/


  3. great ! I love the fluency of the poem mainly the 3rd stanza.good luck to yu in your studies.


  4. beautiful! I love the flow to your words.
    Gerardine


  5. This is absolutely beautiful. You have a real gift for poetry. I can’t wait to see more. 🙂


  6. Hey,
    I found the link to your blog on Jingle. (yep i’m a crazy stalker 😉 no jk)
    I must say, your poetry is impressive and you have alot of talent 🙂
    Yay for fellow TWLOHA supporters too, thats always cool.

    “To shine outside our spaces…”
    I love that line… its something to think on…
    *bookmarks blog*


  7. We have not been seeing you..hope everything is alright.
    you may visit me here
    hugs
    shakira


  8. beautiful poem,
    good luck on your final exams and applications for college!


  9. very nice…. i like it!!! 🙂


  10. Lovely, very well written poem 🙂


  11. Nice poem – really well put together.

    Greetings from Brian in Scotland



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